Friday, May 22, 2020

Birthday

This week for writing, we wrote a recount. My recount is about my birthday. In my writing I used specific nouns, juicy verbs and different sentence starters.
I found it easy to think of a topic to write about.
I found it hard to type my story.
I am a stepping up blogger.
Here is writing.


The party was so loud you couldn't hear people arriving every minute. Playing video games, we waited for more people to arrive. It was my birthday and my brothers and sisters too. Our Nanny and Papa got us all a taonga. My sister got a whales tale. I got one that has a curl in it and my brother has one like a pou. We had 3 vanilla cakes. One for me, one for my sister and 1 for my brother.



1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Kharn,
    I like to see that you have remembered to add all the information at the start of your blog, we worked hard on this during lockdown. You a very lucky to have your birthday on the same day as your brother and sister. Your taonga is called a Mania it will protect you whenever you wear it.
    Thank you for sharing your blog with us today.
    Maybe you could do a bright background for your story?
    Nga mihi nui
    Mrs Tamatea

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